Allegiant: An Alternate Ending
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When I read Allegiant, I was devastated by the death of Tris. I was so angry that the most important character perished in the climax of the series. I started to think about how I would have liked the story to end, and I decided to rewrite the ending. Some of the passages are from the book. I hope you like it!
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