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J'ai longtemps été à la recherche d'un(e) critique littéraire sur Wattpad, mais jamais je n'ai mis la main sur un compte encore actif ou, tout simplement, un compte francophone. C'est pourquoi j'ai décidé de devenir moi-même une «critiqueuse».
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