Inner Workings

So I've wanted to be a writer for quite a while now, and have my found myself wanting to practice to get better. I'd always liked writing out a character, and have wanted to write out a story for the longest time. This would be my resolution to my dilemma. If you care enough to read, please do comment any problems or critiques. I'll try to explain mostly everything within the context of the story itself, hopefully not turning it into an exposition dump. Or not explaining enough.. Here we go.