My Thief Lord And Saviour

I wrote this when I was just 11 so that was a long time ago. I just found my old memory stick and decided to put it up. This story has Scipio from The Thief Lord meeting and falling in love with a young mother of 2, so obviously it's based after the movie when he's an adult. I'm not sure if it's good or not as I said I wrote it when I was 11.