Mr Hook's Big Black Box

Mr Hook's Big Black Box

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If anyone is interested, I'm looking for a group to read this book-club style (one person reading each narrator, with breaks to criticise the story and point out any mistakes I've missed, banter, diversions etc) on a video chat for youtube. Now on hiatus. I moved the story here from another site; and got no feedback at all. After a hundred chapters that becomes soul destroying. If people are interested, I'd love to finish it, but I can't keep doing this when my other pen name is getting a dozen votes per chapter easily and this doesn't even get read. So if you read it and liked it, please comment. Let others know. Let me know I'm not shouting into the void. A Rashomon-style story with student pranks, classroom drama, fake CIA agents, Interpol, secret Russian soldiers, biker rabbits, aliens, the mafia, a clockwork zombie, and a whole lot of lies. Dwayne, Monty, Ferrari, Marco, and Kris were LUSARS: The Lanchester University Samurai Appreciation and Reenactment Society. They were close friends in college, despite very different backgrounds. But they never really talked about what happened when they were appointed custodians of the Box, and none of them know the whole story. It's only at a reunion fifteen years later, when they start sharing their own memories from that week, that the truth might start to emerge. If you've been following this story on #SaturdayScenes over on Google Plus, you'll notice that the Wattpad version is almost a year behind in the story. But this is the second revision, with a lot of the action tightened up and some earlier scenes changed for continuity. So it might be worth reading these even if you've read the earlier revision. As I'm posting twice per week here, and I'm breaking the story up into larger chapters, it shouldn't take too long to catch up with what you've seen on the other site. I'm currently expecting to have the Box open in time for Halloween.
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Akio Watashi never wanted to stand out. Always wanting to stay in the confines of the background. But nobody could believe he would accept the life of the average person. He had the strength, looks, age, and brains to be powerful in a moments time-'They' thought. In his youth he was witty. In his teens he was wise. But the youthful attitude that he had brought to push his mind and self forward got chipped away. He clung to the ways of stubbornness. But he was able to find a new. Although toxic. Way to be able to continuously improve and 'flourish'. Happenings of his past youth crippled him. He put himself in self imposed isolation, it kept his feet his planted. In the worst possible way... Life had many battles. He. And this is wasn't any different. • * • * • * • * • * • * • * • * • * • * • * • * • * • * • * • * • * • * • * • * Publishing Date ; November 14th, 2019 Finishing Date ; I do not own BNHA. Please give love and support to the Anime, Manga, and Author! Please no stealing OCs... (● ˃̶͈̀ロ˂̶͈́)੭ꠥ⁾⁾ Uploads will be as frequent as I can! But sadly no promises. Most uploads will be between 4500-5000 words. (Lol but my mind will probably make me 6000.) Lol if even one person reads this and enjoys it thanks. But heh I kinda have low hopes for this book. It's probably shit cus I've written it and my mind is biased. And I can't ask anybody around me to help with editing or else they might think I'm insane. If it pasts my expectations in improving my writing great. You guys don't have to vote or anything! I appreciate any amount of time given to read my pieces of shit. (Random Shixxxx:When I was reading some random BNHA male OC or character x character stories first thing I thought after reading it for a bit. ' XD Akio's story has NO CHANCE.' (Lol this is a first impulse story. So this is the first OC and plot I've thought of since becoming a fan of BNHA)

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