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Revenge
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"The last thing I remember was smoke; smoke coming from my car, from the drivers’ car, and from black sleek object in his hand. I closed my eyes, the next thing I remember was the odd feelings. I could feel my heart pumping fiercely. The blood was moving from the center of my heart to the rest of my body. Suddenly, I felt the thumping of my chest stop. The final remnants of the blood in my heart rushed out of the open wound in my chest. I immediately felt my hands move to the gaping wound. I looked down at it, blood rushed out of the cracks between my fingers. I looked up in disbelief. My face twisted into a face filled with hate. “Why?” that was the last word I ever spoke. My last breath was painful. I took one final look at the world I was leaving behind, and fell into darkness. This is a story of revenge. Not sweet syrupy revenge, but dark blood filled revenge. This is the story of how I single handedly took down my killer, one day at a time."
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My Teddy

The corner of his mouth tilts upward slightly. I smile again. A smile!? A tiny one, but still. "Hm. So I got you to smile, that's progress, yeah? Can I get your name now?" I ask, swinging my feel a little. He shakes his head shyly, his mouth not moving at all. Geez! Why do I want to hear this dude talk so much? "Okay, that's fine. I can give you a nickname." I offer happily. He looks up from his book, raising his eyebrows. I just stare for a moment. He has nice eyes. Pretty brown chocolate orbs. They remind me so much of....... "Teddy." He shakes his head immediately, frowning. "What, why not? You remind me of my old teddy bear. He was a good listener and he didn't talk much..... just like you." I say softly, tilting my head. He continues to shake his head. I fold my arms, leaning back in my seat. "Yeah, it's definitely sticking. Teddy.....It has a nice ring to it, yeah?" He sighs, the first sound I have ever heard him make. "No." . . . *Jordan* Teddy!? Seriously!? She gave me a fucking NICKNAME!? What the hell does this girl want!? I stuff my hands into my pockets, walking down the busy street. Forget about her. She's just a annoying pretty girl, she'll go away. Everybody does. She HAS to go away. *Spoiler alert*: she doesn't. Don't get close to people or they'll end up getting hurt. That's my mindset. I've been through enough of that. This girl doesn't belong in my world anyway. She's too innocent. *Mature content* {Just a quick update, I am basically rewriting the story. I wrote it when I was in 8th grade and it makes me cringe every time I try to go back and edit it so keep in mind that it'll get better}

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