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Last published Fri, Sep 6, 2019
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Unfortunately my other story was banned so we have to start over. And I had just hit 1k views too :(
These are book reviews out of love! You may not like what you're about to read. My point is to sin books (look up cinema sins on YouTube). I love all the books I read or else I would never waste time reading them. If you're here to leave hate, go for it. Keeps me young.
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