No one has to read this unless they feel like giving some constructive criticism. I've been experiencing writers block lately that I can't seem to shake and I remembered this exercise from 9th grade English class. Hopefully, it helps a little bit.
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Y'all I'm Not Good With Descriptions
(There's a lot of "Then" in this book, because I didn't know how to transition my sentences back then. And I don't plan on going back to fix it, I've tried already. It's very time consuming)