THE INVISIBLE
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Last published Mon, Sep 14, 2020
My eye lids were very heavy and painful to lift. At all cost I opened them and everything looked red and blurred from what I assumed to be blood. My eyes were the only part of my body that moved.
And the only sound I heard was the sound of the car horn constantly blowing.
My eyes were shutting but stopped when I heard a sound that made me at least a bit happy. It was Freddie's bark. He didn't die like I was going to.
That was the last thing I heard before darkness consumed my eyes.
How would you feel if, you discovered you have the ability to be 'invisible' out of the blue. ...ohh the things I would do.
Let's see how Jake would live his life finding out he was the last of his kind
Uhh..okay I have nothing else to say. Lol
There's more to it. Just go on and read already.
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