'Undiscovered Gems' Review

SIck and tired of the same old comments like 'update!', 'omg he's so hot!' and 'you're amazing!' to the people who cannot write, cannot spell and cannot write a proper title? Well, I'm here to give brutally honest feedback because I'm sick of these sugar coated comments too. I don't review people's work unless they ask me to and write for those who can actually can and want to face harsh criticism. I'm very picky but if the story is worth writing a review for, I'll go into depth and detail. Hope you enjoy the reviews!