The Pals in "Deadly Thoughts"
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Denis fell on his butt,groaning and rubbing his head from the sudden pain.He looked up to his bathroom mirror and terrified.His reflection on the mirror smirks evilly as he looked down to the terrified Denis.The reflection was as the same look as Denis but his skin looks pale than normal,had a dark hair including one red eye and one silver eye.
"W-who are you?!"Denis asked in horror.His reflection laughs evilly and looked back at him with his pitiful eyes and an evil grin on his face.
"I'm you but deadlier...,"he replied,still grinning.
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The Pals reunited again when Corl,Alex,Sub and Sketch travels to Kelowna for a little vacation.Plus,they will be staying at Denis's house for a week and nothing couldn't been better than this.Until one day,when a little prank turns to be a horror scene...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~The knife accidentally slashes across Denis's right eye,leaving a big scar on his face.Denis was screaming in pain and everyone in the house were panicking.
"OH NO DENIS IM SO SORRY!!!"Corl said panicking."NO TIME FOR APOLOGIES!BRING HIM TO THE HOSPITAL NOW!!"Alex shouted,bringing a wet cloth and gave it to Corl.Corl was crying his eyeballs out after of what he had done to his best friend.Sub and Sketch were too afraid to do anything.
And suddenly Denis passed out...
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Months passes and no one had the brave to talk about the incident anymore.Since then,Denis began to act strangely than before.He also started to act rage in his videos and swears too much,making his friends concerned about him and went to Kelowna again.
Little did they know,a big chaos will come.And it all started with a scar...
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Swears,Mature,Trigger,Blood
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