Considerations on Love: Ideals and Materials. Poetry Anthology 1

I try to create a dynamic in which im able to condense the entire universe into everyday physical objects, and then specifically extrapolate all of emotion into a single woman. These largely reflect on romantic considerations, some notions of self, identity, and sadness. Its just your regular teenage shitposting essentially. There are elements of formal verse, but largely the poems are free verse. Looking for the harshest criticisms possible. Narratives range from the smile of some woman, to frequent late night walks in September, adventures on a swing set, and considerations on the impact my name has had on my life.