Life in the beginning (Part I)

This and soon to come stories are based off of my experiences. All that is written is honest and true to my fullest extent.

I try to be as detailed as possible when it comes to all my stories and experiences so if you think something(s) should be clarified, feel free to tell me. I'd love some pointers on how to write more efficiently and a way to add imagery to my stories.

Please keep negative comments to yourself as all these are based on true and past experiences and occurrences.

Thanks everyone!