The Tell-Tale Heart Retelling | DIFFERENT PERSPECTIVE

This was an assignment for my English class, we had to rewrite Edgar Allan Poe's "The Tell-Tale Heart" from a different perspective. My choice was, as can be observed in my rewrite, a neighbor who heard the poor old man scream. Enjoy, and if you have an criticism or maybe some tips, please.do let me know in the comments.

COVER ART NOT MINE, BUT I COULDN'T FIGURE OUT WHO IT BELONGS TO
(Also if someone knows who the cover art belongs to, please let me know so I can properly credit them)