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SchrijverSil's feedback shop (NED & EN)

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Hier kun je feedback vragen op je verhaal! Ik hoef er verder niks voor terug. Geen geld, geen stemmen, geen reacties, geen wat dan ook. Wie eerst komt, eerst maalt. Neem gerust een kijkje! De feedbackshop is er zowel voor Nederlandse als Engelse verhalen.
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In this book you can ask for feedback on your stories. You don't need to give me anything in return for it. No money, no votes, no reactions, no whatever. First come, first served. Have a look inside! I am willing to give feedback on both Dutch and English stories.Wszelkie Prawa Zastrzeżone

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