Draft messages {Revised}
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***NEW AND IMPROVED VERSION OF DRAFT MESSAGES!***
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About two years ago I wrote a story called draft messages and has around 4,000 reads on it. I have no idea how it has so many but in honor of that I have decided to rewrite it to make it better. The original story was super cringe and was poorly written. With this being said the chapters will be a little bit longer then before. Iwas around eighth grade when I wrote it and now I'm a junior. I hope I have improved as a writer and hope you guys enjoy the new version.
Addy is going through what almost every other teenage girl has been through before but she's telling her story through emails that she never ends up sending to her ex.
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