I see fire (Louis Tomlinson)
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Last published Wed, Jul 2, 2014
Hi I'm Eleanor Calder and I'm not like other people. Or so I thought.
"I'm not the one you're looking for!" I shout backwards toward him.
"Of course you are!" he yells.
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I hear the footsteps behind me stop and I look around. I sniff. Rubble. My favorite.
A burning building. A woman screaming for her three kids. A boy, a girl and a baby.
"Help! Someone! Please!" she shouts. I run into the burning building with shouts of don't do it ringing in my ear. I walk out with the three kids in my arms. But there's just one thing.
I'm on fire.
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