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Demon's Paradise

Demon's Paradise

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Romance
Heaven is thought to be a beautiful place, and it was... When a young angel wakes up and sees a demonic version of what he believes should be heaven, he decides he needs to find out what happened, and how the paradise in the clouds can be saved. This story is an original by me, any use of this story not given proper authority by me is strictly forbidden. NOTE: This story is a long-time work in progress, each chapter will seem fairly short (obviously) however I intend to make up for this by having a fairly large number of chapters (Current plan is around 40 but is likely to change as I write more of the story) Also any feedback is wonderful, positive or negative I always appreciate it, just leave a comment on the chapter so I can see what you think (I understand there may be a few grammar issues per chapter but I intend to fix them over time.)
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"Who are you?" I demand. The boy in front of me replies, "That's not how this works, love." I freeze. That phrase. That voice. It can't be. I look up but he's just a cloaked silhouette. The rustling stops when boys surrounding us step from their hiding spots and light lanterns. Every single one of them masked and cloaked. Except the one in front of me. The lamps lit, and I see his face. "Whoa," slips from my lips as I stare at the boy in front of me. His eyes widen and his jaw almost, just almost, drops. With his guard down for that one instant I lose all fear and gain control. "You!" I yell suddenly overflowing with anger. My stomach heats with rage. I fight to stand, stronger this time with anger as fuel. He backs up, his breath increasing. Obviously, uneasy, I take it as a win and almost stand all the way. "You. What are you doing here? How did you find this place!" He switched to angry. "You! You're the reason! They put me back because of you! It was all cause of you! It was your fault! All of it!" I'm so angry I yell only what I can. My thoughts flying through my head I can only yell unexplained nonsense. I've never felt anger like this before. The red glow lightly pours off my own skin and I take notice to it. I compare it to the glow coming off of him. Suddenly, it's an instinct to allow the anger to explode and in doing so the red glow is taken from his chest as I absorb it all and throw it out in all directions. I yank down away from the boy holding me just as the red glow gets sucked from him, absorbed into my hands, and then thrown out in a sphere of red glow. All boys stumbling but not by much and the one holding me gets knocked back, I'm free. "You die now, Peter Pan!"

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