Demon's Paradise
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Last published Fri, Feb 1, 2019
Heaven is thought to be a beautiful place, and it was... When a young angel wakes up and sees a demonic version of what he believes should be heaven, he decides he needs to find out what happened, and how the paradise in the clouds can be saved.
This story is an original by me, any use of this story not given proper authority by me is strictly forbidden.
NOTE: This story is a long-time work in progress, each chapter will seem fairly short (obviously) however I intend to make up for this by having a fairly large number of chapters (Current plan is around 40 but is likely to change as I write more of the story)
Also any feedback is wonderful, positive or negative I always appreciate it, just leave a comment on the chapter so I can see what you think (I understand there may be a few grammar issues per chapter but I intend to fix them over time.)
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