Becoming Undone
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I really am terrible at descriptions y'all. This story is still in the progress of developing and coming into its own. As I get a feel for the story and the character as develop I will be redoing this, putting in a proper description......but will y'all tell me what you think of this, should I go on with it??
In a world full of unknowns, and so much unsureness how to you turn down any chance of happiness? All I've ever want was to grow up, finish school get my dream job ( which is to become a neonatal intensive care unit nurse), find the boy of my dreams, get married, buy a house, with yellow shutter and a white picket fence around the yard and have a couple of babies and live happily ever after. Why did life throw so many curve balls?!? Why did life have to royally fuck me? It eventually all came together just not in that order. It all started when I moved into my new foster home, oh yeah I forgot to mention I'm an orphan, I was left at a library when I was around 3 months old by what I'm told. Anyway back to the story, my new foster parents were different then the rest that if had. They weren't drunks, or just fostering me for the money. They actually acted like they cared and wanted to help me. I'm 16 years old now, not many people want to foster a teenager with anger issues.
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