Twisted Desire

I've been trying to come up with a story, and we'll give it a try. My Grammar isn't the greatest or my punctuation.. I really need help editing this story if I finish it. I'm a foodie, but I love reading stories on Wattpad but cooking is definitely my strength. I'm not good with description so if anyone wants to help me I would appreciate it very much.

So this is a story I came up with , it's a little twisted sick even or perverted their are some sad moment .I've been recently sick and as it happens I end up binging on reading stories on Wattpad , Quotev, fanfiction and other places you name it. I have witten some stories in the past but I guess I'm not a very good writer. Okay I admit my grammar is shit I love to read but when it comes to my composition it's not good and I definitely know it but I'm trying. I've recently been reading so many Yanderes and I'm literally obsessed with them. Now this is not a yandere I still have to work on that but the stories I read gave me ideas to write this story and well I admit I'm sick I love stories where guys are obsessed with a certain girl that they feel they must have. Stories where the guy dominates the girl breaks her completely with his perverted lessons and punishments but still feels that he loves her. He just wants to love her the way he wants so I hope you give this story a try and let me know what you think.