Torn
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Last published Tue, Jul 10, 2012
It happened so fast, I just turn 16 teen and my friends and family were frowning me a surprise party. Well it wasn’t much a surprise since my little sister Ella told me. But I still pretended that I dint know. My dad was driving and my mom and I were singing Electric Twist from The Fine Franzy. My mom and I weren’t that bad of singers in fact my mom had a beautiful voice, mean while I was taken singing lessons. My dad actually enjoyed our singing he never complained if he did he just wanted to annoy us. After a while my dad said will be arriving soon to our favorite restaurant, we stopped because it was a red light. Meanwhile my dad was telling us a joke and I was laughing since he was really bad at making jokes but that dint stop him, he always wanted to make us lough. I don’t remember much after that,the light turn green, my mom turn her head to look at me and she said “Elizabeth I love you, remember that we both love you, happy birth day my dear” I just smiled and said “thank you” after that I felt a huge pain in my body and everything went black.
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