Heret's Castle
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Saw this story in my drafts and it's dated back to 2018. Little 14 year old me had potential, if i had actually used proper capitalization!
enjoy.
-2022 me
In a Kingdom Filled With Magic, Sorcery, Corruption and Chaos.
Where you're either the one Getting Betrayed or The Traitor.
Where People Are willing to do Anything just to get their Hands On Magic.
Why?
So they Could have A Big Chance At Being the one who Broke The Spell that Brought Misery to This Kingdom.
The Spell That Froze The Castle In Time.
The Castle Where The Stronger and More Powerful Witches and Wizards Live.
Where The Greatest Sorceress and Sorcerers Teach.
Where they Have Been Frozen For Decades.
Heret's Castle is Our Only Hope.
Join me In this Journey.
And See if My Story Is Worth Reading.
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