Cask of Amontillado: The Next Installment

For all you Edgar Allen Poe lovers, here is how I believe the rest of "The Cask of Amontillado" would have gone! For those of you who have not read "The Cask of Amontillado", here is the plot: this is the story of a man named Montresor who decides to seek revenge against a man named Fortunato, who has insulted him. He meets Fortunato at a carnival, lures him into the catacombs of his home, and buries him alive by building a brick wall around him, thus suffocating him.
This is just trying my hand at some more Gothic narrative stuff. Feedback appreciated, if anyone ever sees this anyways, which you probably won't.