A Premonition
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  • Reads 34
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  • Parts 4
  • Time 53m
Ongoing, First published May 19, 2014
We looked out on a barren world, a world of chaos, and none of us knew how to change it. All we knew was this was our future, and it was coming very soon

There is a world, far away, where some people can peer into the future. They gaze at it through a cloudy fog and try to make sense of what it says. From the beginning these Premonitions were exploited for their power. Enslaved by the Betian kingdom, they struggle to even find an existence worth living. But when three very different Premonitions foresee the end of the world they know, they battle with everything inside them to change it.

As a Premonition, Reya has never expected kindness, especially not from strangers. All she wants to do is survive each day as it passes. But when the Betian Prince takes an interest in her and takes her to be employed at the Palace she uses her new position to try and change the horrible vision she has night after night. But her secret drive could ruin the only happiness she's ever truly had.

Aja is a Princess. The model of Betian society, she stands above her peers and smiles gracefully from family portraits. But she has a secret she could never tell anyone, not even her father. 
Aja is a Premonition. Only her mother and younger brother know, and she hides the fact everyday because if anyone ever found out she would be enslaved. But when a dark cloud looms in the Future, she finds herself closer than ever to exposing her secret in hopes of saving her kingdom.

Daren will always be in debt to the family that bought him off his auction block. They took him in and treated him fairly. So when they asked him to stay with them and be a part of their scheme to save hundreds of Premonitions by sending them to far off lands, he couldn't even imagine disagreeing. But he has secrets he can't reveal, secrets that could threaten not only the friendships he's made but even the world.
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