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• A Wings of Fire/Warrior Cats OC Review •
More like 'OC First Impressions', haha! Basically what I do here is comment on my first impressions of your OC and then give you some tips on what to improve. I may not always have advice for you, and that would either be because your OC is a hopeless case or it's so well written that I can't find anything to fix.
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