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UNDER EDITING THE ONE'S EDITED ARE MARKED WITH ✅ This is a challenge for everyone who are interested to transform there self's . If you are not a person to take a challenge then you are not allowed to read further . I will be posting a challenge a day , each day for the next 30 days . Let's make the next year the best year . Top Rankings :-[ 01 / 08 / 2024 ] 1 in motivation [ 09/07/2025 ] 1 in bookshelf [ 01/08/2024 ] 1 in motivationalquotes [ 01/08/2024 ] 1 in bookshelf [ 01/08/2024 ] 1 in selfhelpbook [ 01/08/2024 ] 1 in selfhelpbooks [ 01/08/2024 ] 1 in booksbooksbooks [ 01/08/2024 ] 1 in nonfictionbook [ 14/01/2025 ]Zakończone
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ChromaTober 2024 | Co-Hosted by IcyWillowSong
Helloooooo everybody! Once again I'm hosting writing prompts, and this time I'm joined by my friend (and angst war opponent) IcyWillowSong :3 This time, the contest is all about choices! Rules in the first chapter, hope everybody has fun writing!Zakończone
Shattered Vows (18 +) I ✔
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That Night | 𝘑𝘶𝘥𝘦 𝘉𝘦𝘭𝘭𝘪𝘯𝘨𝘩𝘢𝘮
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BACK AGAIN- ᴊᴜᴅᴇ ʙᴇʟʟɪɴɢʜᴀᴍ
Through trauma and difficulties, Davina Vàsquez finds her way into Madrid, working as a physiotherapist, where she meets an old friend who goes by the name of Jude Bellingham, the person she despises. They have at each other while she's working there, resulting in another falling out causing her to move back to England. What happens when they suddenly reunite and catch the attention of the public? Will they deny anything? (This story is set so that Jude has played for Real Madrid a longer time than in the real world, just so you keep that in mind while reading the story.) WARNING: mentions of VIOLENCE, TRAUMA, profusive LANGUAGE and use of ALCOHOLZakończone
UNDER EDITING THE ONE'S EDITED ARE MARKED WITH ✅ This is a challenge for everyone who are interested to transform there self's . If you are not a person to take a challenge then you are not allowed to read further . I will be posting a challenge a day , each day for the next 30 days . Let's make the next year the best year . Top Rankings :-[ 01 / 08 / 2024 ] 1 in motivation [ 09/07/2025 ] 1 in bookshelf [ 01/08/2024 ] 1 in motivationalquotes [ 01/08/2024 ] 1 in bookshelf [ 01/08/2024 ] 1 in selfhelpbook [ 01/08/2024 ] 1 in selfhelpbooks [ 01/08/2024 ] 1 in booksbooksbooks [ 01/08/2024 ] 1 in nonfictionbook [ 14/01/2025 ]
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