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"I just.. Stopped.."

"I just.. Stopped.."

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WpMetadataNoticeLast published Wed, Nov 28, 2018
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Science Fiction
"How are you doing Mrs. Eggolnog. Here for Ben's results?" Dr. Harver held up papers, reading them slightly. "Yes, I need to know what is wrong with him." Christine looked at Ben. He was anxiously waiting. "Well, when was his fourteenth birthday?" The doctor asked. "About a month ago, but he doesn't feel fourteen." The mother sadly sniffled. "That's because he isn't." The answer shocked the mother. "He has some disease that I am for now calling Stop disease. We've never seen a gene like his before. He completely stopped aging when he became twelve." "That's.. Impossible!" The mother shouted, tears forming. "I need to see him grow up! His older sister is fine why isn't he!?" "I'm afraid none of the doctors in this building, including me, don't know what is wrong." "NO!! I CAN'T HAVE HIM JUST STOP!!" She broke the jar next to her. "Ma'am we need you to leave." The doctor said sternly. He looked towards the boy sitting on the doctor bed. He was looking down. Dr. Harver couldn't see his broken eyes. Fake disease TW blood, maybe sexual themes or implied TW and harsh bullying, curses,and sadness TW Name of disease: Stollio triolsae Ben Eggolnog was a normal baby, child, and te- wait he never got to be a teen??? He stopped aging at twelve, and just couldn't die. His doctor didn't know what happened to him. Could this be good or bad..?
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They had both been dealt enough tragedy in their short teenaged lives, more than anyone should ever have to endure. Will two self destructive teens coming together do more harm than good? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I don't know what came over me. The poor guy just asked if he could help and I went all 'crazy psycho bitch' on his ass. I couldn't breath. I needed water. I needed air. Fuck why was is it so hot in here. Was it the fact that the moment his hand left my skin I felt an unbearable need to feel his touch again or was it hearing him ask if I needed help that made me feel helpless and broken once again. I didn't know what it was but I felt like I was suffocating, like the jersey I was wearing was strangling every ounce of oxygen from body. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ * This story had been reviewed recently. There are now added scenes and further edits - 2024 *

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