The Beginning Of The End (Divergent High)

Hi guys, this is the first time I publish something so tell me what you think but please don't be too harsh. leave a comment if you want more. The characters in the story where inspired by those in divergent and they also have the same names.
Tris just started junior year, she was always invisible but, after a makeover she is ready to change that. But, something stirring happens, she has to make a choice, a choice that will affect the rest of her life (you learn about the choice in chapter 3).