The Boy on the Bench

The Boy on the Bench

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A woman comes across a boy, and she can't take her eyes of him. Little did she know that this would be the biggest mistake she'd had ever made. "Do not judge, or you too will be judged." Short story. I was feeling particularly nasty writing this. It's basically a take on "Don't judge a book by it's cover." Please leave a comment with whatever constructive criticism (or maybe even appreciation TEEHEE) you have for me. It only makes me a better writer. All opinions welcome! :)
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I'm doing a story based on these three words. Perfect. Stuck. Lost. My friend is also doing this challenge so i hope you enjoy this story! And don't worry i'll still work on my other story!! This story is about a boy who wants to do things the way his home used to live like. . . will he see the flaws in others and judge them or learn to be understanding of others? Read to find out. It is my first few books so this may suck but I'll get better. Super cringe so just switch to one of my other books. Probs won't finish book two of this, if I'm being honest, this wasn't the best. Might rewrite it one day. (Looking back, I was on some sort of drugs cause what was I thinking? I'm surprised people can even find this garbage fire.)

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