I Am Undone
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- Parts 10
MatureOngoing1h 45m
Last published Wed, Dec 10, 2014
When I thought I would pass out from the heat and lack of air, he pulled back. With the steam, it was already hard enough to breathe. As we tried to even our breathing, he tapped his forehead against mine. His dark eyes stared into mine, and my heart froze. "10 more days," he whispered before everything went black.
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