Red Dotted Hands

Red Dotted Hands

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(Not completed just waiting for people to give me advice on what I have done so far cause my writing sucks.) She does not remember that day. She was there 11 years go. Join Miss Fiona Collins as a young investigator to solve the crime of who and where the two murderous lovesick couple from 11 years ago went. Will she find the murderers out of the 100 suspects? Will she be suspected? After all she was there at the music program at the same time as the young twisted love birds. One suspect has caught her eye. Attractive 25 year old who is extremely charming. Damian Fuller. (It is set in Auckland New Zealand I will use real place names but all these events are fiction)
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