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Songs by Kazimir Noir

Songs by Kazimir Noir

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Poetry
So I wrote some songs and I gotta share them somewhere so I can get people's opinions! It's okay if you think they suck, I'm really new to this so I won't be offended, just tell me why it sucks and how I can fix it! A quick WARNING: There are curse words in some of these but I don't think there are enough to label it "mature"
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