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⋆⭒˚｡⋆BOOK 2 OF 3⋆⭒˚｡⋆ What if Harry and Draco weren't enemies because of a rejected friendship or jealousy? What if it was because they both fell for the same girl? ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ˚★⋆｡˚ ⋆ ┊ ┊ ┊ ⋆ ┊ ┊ ★⋆ ┊ ◦ ★⋆ ┊ . ˚ ˚★ Her skill forces her seclusion. Mabel Whitlock enters the Wizarding World and quickly becomes placed in a dangerous situation. She's powerful in a time where said power is required by both light and dark sides. Light and dark sides that she is torn between for various reasons. Family, responsibility, fear, love. Questions need answers. But it's the risk of whether those answers are ones Bel wants to hear. Soon, and with every passing year, things become more and more clear. And more and more dark. ⋆｡°✩[Powerfem!OC x Harry Potter]⋆｡°✩ ⋆｡°✩[Powerfem!OC x Draco Malfoy]⋆｡°✩ WELCOME TO SKILL AND SECLUSION :) This is the second part of my first HP FF. I have been planning this one through for years now and am so excited to finally be writing it. I'm so happy you've chosen this one and I hope you enjoy, if you don't that's also chill too, my writing isn't brilliant I don't blame u lol I should warn you now, this is ur basic fanfic. I'm talking an overpowered OC with multiple love interests. But hey, it's cliche for a reason ... ENJOY Y'ALL :) TRIGGER WARNING : There will be mentions of emotional and physical abuse, flashbacks, sexual themes and some strong language. If any of these might trigger you, please go and try out another one of the incredible fanfics! Feel free to return when you feel comfortable :) All rights go to Warner Bros. and JK Rowling for the characters and the world in this fanfic. I only take credit for my OCs and original scenes xx
𝐖𝐡𝐢𝐬𝐩𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝐎𝐟 𝐃𝐞𝐬𝐢𝐫𝐞 - 𝐌𝐚𝐭𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐨 𝐑𝐢𝐝𝐝𝐥𝐞 𝐱 𝐑𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐞𝐫
𝐘/𝐧 𝐒𝐧𝐚𝐩𝐞. 𝐎𝐧𝐜𝐞 𝐫𝐢𝐝𝐢𝐜𝐮𝐥𝐞𝐝 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐥𝐨𝐚𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐝 𝐛𝐲 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐒𝐥𝐲𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐧 𝐩𝐞𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐧𝐬 𝐢𝐧𝐭𝐨 𝐭𝐡𝐞 '𝐒𝐥𝐲𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐧 𝐏𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐜𝐞𝐬𝐬' 𝐚𝐟𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐚 𝐬𝐮𝐦𝐦𝐞𝐫 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐛𝐥𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐞𝐝 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐝𝐞𝐚𝐫𝐥𝐲. 𝐅𝐫𝐢𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐬 𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐧 𝐭𝐨 𝐟𝐨𝐞, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐮𝐧𝐞𝐱𝐩𝐞𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐛𝐨𝐧𝐝𝐬 𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐦. 𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐥𝐢𝐧𝐞 𝐨𝐟 𝐝𝐚𝐫𝐤 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐥𝐢𝐠𝐡𝐭 𝐢𝐬 𝐭𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐞𝐝 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐥𝐢𝐭𝐭𝐥𝐞 𝐜𝐚𝐮𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧. ᠃ ⚘᠂ ⚘ ˚ ⚘ ᠂ ⚘ ᠃ ᴀʟʟ ᴄʜᴀᴘᴛᴇʀꜱ ᴀʀᴇ (roughly) 2000-3500 ᴡᴏʀᴅꜱ <3 ᴛʜɪꜱ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡᴏʀᴋ ɪɴ ᴘʀᴏɢʀᴇꜱꜱ!! ᠃ ⚘᠂ ⚘ ˚ ⚘ ᠂ ⚘ ᠃ Started: 01/11/2023 Completed: ~~/~~/~~~~ ᠃ ⚘᠂ ⚘ ˚ ⚘ ᠂ ⚘ ᠃ I do not own any of these characters a part from Y/n! Credits go to JK Rowling and yasmineamaro for the characters used in this fan fiction! The storyline is original by me <3 ᠃ ⚘᠂ ⚘ ˚ ⚘ ᠂ ⚘ ᠃ ©n1ghtmar3XD 2023
Stolen Hearts (Harry Potter x Reader)
*•.~(Harry Potter x Fem! Reader) *** "It is," Hermione confirmed. "I heard we're going to a cabin site," "Everyone?" Harry asked, frowning curiously. "Only the sixth and seventh years," Y/N responded. "They've never done this before!" "I know," Ron said, chewing thoughtfully. "Oi- should we throw a party?" "Party?" Hermione asked, raising her eyebrows. "Yeah," Ron shrugged and he leaned in closer. "I heard every other house is. We should do one! I bet it'd be better than everyone else's." "We should!" Y/N said excitedly. "We should tell everyone on the ride there," "Agreed," Ron said, grinning. The pair high-fived each other as Hermione shook her head. "This is going to be fun." *** Two best friends, two hearts, their both stolen... The last thing on the famous Harry Potter's mind was to find love, besides- he's never heard of it or felt it. All he wanted was to get rid of the Dursley's and go to Hogwarts when he found out he was a wizard. It wasn't until then when he found her... Y/N 'L/N' Their story begins on the Hogwarts Express, after Harry gets frightened by a few twin boys with red flaming hair and enters Y/N's compartment where she's sitting alone except for her owl. The two kids immediately hit it off and create a special bond, growing older that bond blooms into something special, love... Now, Y/N has the choice of whether or not to remain friends... to be what he needs most or find out more about the gap holes and secrets in her family history. *•ᴛʜɪs sᴛᴏʀʏ ᴄᴏɴᴛᴀɪɴs... -Cursing/swearing -Fictional Violence -Book/Movie based storylines -Fluff (no smut) *I DO NOT OWN HARRY POTTER* *SLOW UPDATES!* (I try my best!!)![Power and Persecution [1] || Harry Potter x OC x Draco Malfoy](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/342553464-256-k941799.jpg)
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⋆⭒˚｡⋆BOOK 1 OF 3⋆⭒˚｡⋆ What if Harry and Draco weren't enemies because of a rejected friendship or jealousy? What if it was because they both fell for the same girl? ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ˚★⋆｡˚ ⋆ ┊ ┊ ┊ ⋆ ┊ ┊ ★⋆ ┊ ◦ ★⋆ ┊ . ˚ ˚★ With great power comes great persecution. Mabel Whitlock enters the Wizarding World and quickly becomes placed in a dangerous situation. She's powerful in a time where said power is required by both light and dark sides. Light and dark sides that she is torn between for various reasons. Family, responsibility, fear, love. Questions need answers. But it's the risk of whether those answers are ones Bel wants to hear. Soon, and with every passing year, things become more and more clear. And more and more dark. ⋆｡°✩[Powerfem!OC x Harry Potter]⋆｡°✩ ⋆｡°✩[Powerfem!OC x Draco Malfoy]⋆｡°✩ WELCOME TO POWER AND PERSECUTION :) This is my first HP FF. I have been planning this one through for years now and am so excited to finally be writing it. I'm so happy you've chosen this one and I hope you enjoy, if you don't that's also chill too, my writing isn't brilliant I don't blame u lol I should warn you now, this is ur basic fanfic. I'm talking an overpowered OC with multiple love interests. But hey, it's cliche for a reason ... ENJOY Y'ALL :) TRIGGER WARNING : There will be mentions of emotional and physical abuse, flashbacks, sexual themes and some strong language. If any of these might trigger you, please go and try out another one of the incredible fanfics! Feel free to return when you feel comfortable :) All rights go to Warner Bros. and JK Rowling for the characters and the world in this fanfic. I only take credit for my OCs and original scenes xxComplete
A catalog of ALL of my OC's!
I decided since I haven't been active at all on Wattpad besides reading fanfictions I would make a book where you can see all my characters shown in a template I made! its shows basic info on the character and some lore for them to get the gist of them! i am allowing questions for characters and even questions on my other books! story will be updated frequently as i can bc SCHOOL! I currently have 77+ OCS to my name (that's a lot) 😂
Yours, Fred | f. weasley x reader
Fred Weasley x F!Reader ----- When you stepped onto the Hogwarts Express for the first time, you had no idea that you were about to meet who would become the two most important people in your life. Fred and George Weasley became your best friends, and throughout your years at Hogwarts, you were rarely seen without them by your side. But what happens when you get older and you realise that you've started falling for one of them? And what happens when dark forces emerge that threaten the very existence of everything you hold dear? Will you finally get everything you've ever wanted, or will you lose everything? ___ [Started: 8th October 2021] [Status: Complete] [Finished: 5th January 2022] **Original characters and original storylines belong to me, but most characters and general storyline belong to JKRComplete
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I just adore Dray and yeah COMPLETED Started: April 6th, 2020 Ended: April 11th, 2021 DISCLAMER: I don't own any of the characters, settings, and some plots in this book! I may come up with new plots and ideas and I'll give credit for any requests. If you give a request but don't want to be mentioned I'll label it as a request but I won't mention who requests.Complete
The One: Fred Weasley X Reader
Y/N Lupin had been friends with the Weasleys since first year, they were inseparable. Ever since her parents and older brother, Carter, died in a tragic fire, just before the summer, at the Lupin mansion, she has been staying with her Uncle Remus. She wasn't close to her parents as her dad was very much the opposite of his brother, Remus. Her mother adored her brother and always expected more from Y/N, they didn't have the mother daughter bond that Y/N craved. She didn't really like her brother either as he wasn't the kindest to her. They were against her friendship with the Weasleys due to them not being the same class as them. They were one of the richest families in the wizarding world due to there high job roles. This is the beginning of their sixth year. This is my first fanfiction so my writing isn't as good at the start but it has got better throughout. Please leave suggestions and what you would like to happen, thank you for choosing this story. I DO NOT own these characters. #1 in #FREDWEALSEY 29/11/2020-30/11/2020 #1 in #FRED 03/01/2021-04/01/2021 #1 in #FREDWEASLEYXREADER 15/04/2021-16/04/2021 #1 in #HOGWARTS 14/05/2021-15/05/2021 #1 in #XREADER 14/05/2021-15/05/2021Complete
OC's Creation
This will contain my OCs for various shows, and books, which I like to create for fun. I don't own any of the shows, Books, that they are based on. Any Artwork that is shown does not belong to me nor do I own it but they all belong to their specific creators and designers so make sure to give them their credit and appreciation. (Ps. anyone who wants to use any of my OCs will have to ask me for permission and also the appearance character will not always be based on what the picture looks like. Also, I do not own any of the artwork or the shows that my Ocs belong to. Also, many of the characters I create will often possess different names that come from different cultures and races and some of them will also have different preferences for who they love be they the opposite or the same gender to show my support to the LGBT community.)Complete
Marooned - Fred Weasley
"Whatever memories and moments define who you are or who you want to be, this one was among his." _ The second Sarah McCauley stepped over the threshold of the Burrow, bruised arm and heart, she knew it would become a special place to her. The second she met the Weasleys, she knew they will become the people she cares most for. It didn't take long to realize the twins had met their match. From that moment started a never-ending whirlwind of chases, play fights and bickering, building up to forming a formidable trio. All the while she and Fred, her best friend also Co-Trouble-Maker-in-Chief, slowly fall for each other. Falling for their best friend. What could be more idiotic? As if another complication was needed. Time goes by and the mystery surrounding her past and that dreadful Halloween night still fills her heart. What happened that led up to that night? That night that left her marooned on the wooden floor. And what will happen now that winds of war come about once again? _ unbelievably grateful to have been rated #1 for fred #2 for fredweasley #3 for orderofthephoenix #2 for fredseasleyfanfiction #4 for weasleys #3 for fredweasleyfanfic Some characters are originals and owned by me, such as Sarah McCauley, her parents, Alexander Zeal and Selena Collins and some brief additions. The Harry Potter characters are intellectual property of JK Rowling. _ Story start: May 6, 2023 Story end: December 4th, 2023Complete
⋆⭒˚｡⋆BOOK 2 OF 3⋆⭒˚｡⋆ What if Harry and Draco weren't enemies because of a rejected friendship or jealousy? What if it was because they both fell for the same girl? ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ┊ ˚★⋆｡˚ ⋆ ┊ ┊ ┊ ⋆ ┊ ┊ ★⋆ ┊ ◦ ★⋆ ┊ . ˚ ˚★ Her skill forces her seclusion. Mabel Whitlock enters the Wizarding World and quickly becomes placed in a dangerous situation. She's powerful in a time where said power is required by both light and dark sides. Light and dark sides that she is torn between for various reasons. Family, responsibility, fear, love. Questions need answers. But it's the risk of whether those answers are ones Bel wants to hear. Soon, and with every passing year, things become more and more clear. And more and more dark. ⋆｡°✩[Powerfem!OC x Harry Potter]⋆｡°✩ ⋆｡°✩[Powerfem!OC x Draco Malfoy]⋆｡°✩ WELCOME TO SKILL AND SECLUSION :) This is the second part of my first HP FF. I have been planning this one through for years now and am so excited to finally be writing it. I'm so happy you've chosen this one and I hope you enjoy, if you don't that's also chill too, my writing isn't brilliant I don't blame u lol I should warn you now, this is ur basic fanfic. I'm talking an overpowered OC with multiple love interests. But hey, it's cliche for a reason ... ENJOY Y'ALL :) TRIGGER WARNING : There will be mentions of emotional and physical abuse, flashbacks, sexual themes and some strong language. If any of these might trigger you, please go and try out another one of the incredible fanfics! Feel free to return when you feel comfortable :) All rights go to Warner Bros. and JK Rowling for the characters and the world in this fanfic. I only take credit for my OCs and original scenes xx
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