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OC Reviews // OPEN
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Ongoing, First published Nov 17, 2018
Want to find out if your OC is creative and original and don't want to go to a book with 15k views already and a million comments? Well, you've come to the right place! Just fill out a form, send it in, and receive some constructive criticism that can hopefully help you improve your character!

**Warning! I will not sugarcoat my reviews! If your character is awful, I will tell you so, but try to help you improve them and say it in a slightly better way.**
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