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𝐘/𝐧 𝐒𝐧𝐚𝐩𝐞. 𝐎𝐧𝐜𝐞 𝐫𝐢𝐝𝐢𝐜𝐮𝐥𝐞𝐝 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐥𝐨𝐚𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐝 𝐛𝐲 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐒𝐥𝐲𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐧 𝐩𝐞𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐧𝐬 𝐢𝐧𝐭𝐨 𝐭𝐡𝐞 '𝐒𝐥𝐲𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐧 𝐏𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐜𝐞𝐬𝐬' 𝐚𝐟𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐚 𝐬𝐮𝐦𝐦𝐞𝐫 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐛𝐥𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐞𝐝 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐝𝐞𝐚𝐫𝐥𝐲. 𝐅𝐫𝐢𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐬 𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐧 𝐭𝐨 𝐟𝐨𝐞, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐮𝐧𝐞𝐱𝐩𝐞𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐛𝐨𝐧𝐝𝐬 𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐦. 𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐥𝐢𝐧𝐞 𝐨𝐟 𝐝𝐚𝐫𝐤 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐥𝐢𝐠𝐡𝐭 𝐢𝐬 𝐭𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐞𝐝 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐥𝐢𝐭𝐭𝐥𝐞 𝐜𝐚𝐮𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧. ᠃ ⚘᠂ ⚘ ˚ ⚘ ᠂ ⚘ ᠃ ᴀʟʟ ᴄʜᴀᴘᴛᴇʀꜱ ᴀʀᴇ (roughly) 2000-3500 ᴡᴏʀᴅꜱ <3 ᴛʜɪꜱ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡᴏʀᴋ ɪɴ ᴘʀᴏɢʀᴇꜱꜱ!! ᠃ ⚘᠂ ⚘ ˚ ⚘ ᠂ ⚘ ᠃ Started: 01/11/2023 Completed: ~~/~~/~~~~ ᠃ ⚘᠂ ⚘ ˚ ⚘ ᠂ ⚘ ᠃ I do not own any of these characters a part from Y/n! Credits go to JK Rowling and yasmineamaro for the characters used in this fan fiction! The storyline is original by me <3 ᠃ ⚘᠂ ⚘ ˚ ⚘ ᠂ ⚘ ᠃ ©n1ghtmar3XD 2023
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Skill and Seclusion [2] || Harry Potter x OC x Draco Malfoy
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