The Robbed Innocence

This is short story of what P'No would do if he found out of all of Kla's lies and deceit in order to get him. This is a piece that I wanted to write to show what emotional turmoil P'No would undergo if he came to know about Kla.
Kla and No were in a relationship for the past three years when No overhead Kla and Nick talking which was like a wakeup call for him of what was happening to him and how he had been played basically from the beginning of his relationship.
So what do you feel guys should I continue with this short story. As this my first time writing on whattpad.