Críticas (From Universe 0)

Críticas (From Universe 0)

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Last published Thu, Aug 8, 2019

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Todas las historias tienen su universo propio. ¿Deséais una opinión sobre el tuyo? Créditos de portada: Mileidy Blanco♥

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hello guys ,it's me again so recently Wattpad deleted my Previous story that was carrying the same name as this . I was told I violated a community guide line but I really couldn't think of one because I made sure I followed all the rules made . so I'm using this as a medium to announce to every one of you beautiful people who liked commented and read my story that I'm writing this again. it's not gonna be the same but I promise it gets better , and also a medium to apologize to Wattpad for the guideline I violated previously it won't happen again and if it does I want to be called out on my mistake so I would be able to rectify it immediately thank you .🥺❤️ so guys welcome once again to a world where all your deepest , wildest fantasies comes to life . enjoy ...................😉❤️ MATURE CONTENT :please note this story is not suitable for beautiful people under the age of 18 , or those that don't read geners like this .❤️ RATED 18🔞🚨
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"That means you were the only one who destroyed my whole life!" She said to him with tears filled in her eyes. "You call other people heartless and what about you? Didn't you have a heart back then when you killed my love!" He shouted pinning her to the wall. "It's not my question's answer!" She told him looking into his eyes with red teary eyes. "You know it was my mistake to love a woman like you. You are same as other people selfish and murderer. Get out of my fucking life!" He shouted pushing her to the ground and make her fall onto the ground. "You hurted me too! And now there's no coming back. You killed my life! I HATE YOU FOR THIS!" She said standing up and got out from the room. ⋇⋆✦⋆⋇　 🅂🅄🄷🄰🄽🄰 🅂🄴🄽🄸 24 year old who lost her mother and father in an accident, despite having many obstacles in her life she takes thing positively and lives happily with everyone and believes love is the purest feeling in this world. She studies in college. 🅂🄷🄰🅅🄰🄽 🅂🄸🄽🄶🄷🄰🄽🄸🄰 24 year old who studies in the same college and same class as of Suhana. He is a secret agent and believes love only can't fulfill all the needs of life. He likes to focus on his work and hates talking with people. What will happen when both Shavan and Suhana will discover a mystery related to their past! Will destiny end them up together? Come with me in the roller coaster ride of suvan❤🔥 𝙽𝚘𝚝𝚎:- 𝚃𝚑𝚒𝚜 𝙽𝚘𝚟𝚎𝚕 𝚖𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝 𝚌𝚘𝚗𝚝𝚊𝚒𝚗 𝙼𝙰𝚃𝚄𝚁𝙴 𝙲𝙾𝙽𝚃𝙴𝙽𝚃!!! Heyyaa lovelies❤!!! This is my first wattpad story. So if you like it do vote and comment on the chapters and follow me for more updates💓💓....
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╰┈➤ ʳᵉᵃᵈ ⁱⁿ ᵈᵃʳᵏ ᵐᵒᵈᵉ✿! 𝐀𝐧𝐚ï𝐬 𝐑𝐞𝐲𝐞𝐬 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐌𝐢𝐥𝐞𝐬 𝐌𝐨𝐫𝐚𝐥𝐞𝐬. 𝐓𝐰𝐨 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐥𝐝𝐬 𝐜𝐨𝐥𝐥𝐢𝐝𝐞, 𝐛𝐨𝐭𝐡 𝐛𝐚𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐝 𝐢𝐧 𝐰𝐞𝐚𝐥𝐭𝐡 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐩𝐫𝐢𝐯𝐢𝐥𝐞𝐠𝐞, 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐧𝐞𝐢𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐬𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐬𝐟𝐢𝐞𝐝. 𝐀𝐧𝐚ï𝐬 𝐢𝐬 𝐚 𝐡𝐨𝐩𝐞𝐥𝐞𝐬𝐬 𝐫𝐨𝐦𝐚𝐧𝐭𝐢𝐜, 𝐲𝐞𝐚𝐫𝐧𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐥, 𝐰𝐡𝐢𝐥𝐞 𝐌𝐢𝐥𝐞𝐬 𝐢𝐬 𝐥𝐨𝐬𝐭 𝐢𝐧 𝐚 𝐬𝐞𝐚 𝐨𝐟 𝐭𝐞𝐦𝐩𝐨𝐫𝐚𝐫𝐲 𝐜𝐨𝐧𝐧𝐞𝐜𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧𝐬. 𝐒𝐡𝐞 𝐛𝐞𝐥𝐢𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐬 𝐢𝐧 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞-𝐡𝐞'𝐬 𝐥𝐨𝐧𝐠 𝐬𝐢𝐧𝐜𝐞 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐩𝐩𝐞𝐝. 𝐖𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐢𝐫 𝐩𝐚𝐭𝐡𝐬 𝐜𝐫𝐨𝐬𝐬, 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐲'𝐫𝐞 𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐜𝐞𝐝 𝐢𝐧𝐭𝐨 𝐚 𝐠𝐚𝐦𝐞 𝐧𝐞𝐢𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐨𝐟 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐦 𝐞𝐱𝐩𝐞𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐭𝐨 𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐲. 𝐎𝐧𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠'𝐬 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐬𝐮𝐫𝐞: 𝐌𝐢𝐥𝐞𝐬 𝐰𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝 𝐧𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐥𝐞𝐭 𝐚𝐧𝐲𝐨𝐧𝐞 𝐢𝐧. 𝐄𝐬𝐩𝐞𝐜𝐢𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐧𝐨𝐭 𝐡𝐞𝐫.
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