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Ellie is Cool Now by victoriaandfaith

Ellie Jenkins is struggling to write a high school TV show, so her boss gives her an ultimatum: go to her ten year reunion or lose her big break forever.. ***** Ellie Jenkins definitely didn't peak in high school. She was an outsider, an invisible girl with a desperate crush on Mark Wright, a guy who hardly knew her name. But ten years later, she's living in Los Angeles, trying to write a hit show about cool high school kids, when an invitation for her high school reunion arrives. She doesn't want to go, but her writing has been suffering and her boss makes her an ultimatum: go to this reunion or lose her big break forever. Her boss even gives her a list of challenges to complete! Ellie takes the bait and returns to the school determined to find friends, fun and to prove to Mark Wright, once and for all, that Ellie is cool now. [[2018 WATTY AWARD WINNER: THE HIDDEN GEMS!!!!!!!]] [[A TOP WATTPAD PICK: FEATURED IN MILLENNIALS & MAYHEM]] [[word count: 70,000-80,000 words]]

Gardenia: A Review Shop by -Chrysalis_Realm

✿﹒Welcome to Gardenia: A Review Shop! ﹒ㄑ Get custom reviews to help your book gain the acknowledgment it deserves. With our well-experienced reviewers, you will have the best opportunity to learn from your own writing and earn feedback that will last you a lifetime. Whether it's a novel you've been sitting on for months, or something you've brewed for years, our reviewers are here to help! Get a review now and learn your strengths and weaknesses! Graphics by: @ReynaBennett Credits to: @-yunsnte, @dead_poet_7 **This work is not affiliated with Wattpad.**

Moon Bound by AlaraBirch

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Secret by MalikaDreams

So this is my first book on wattpad and if I finish it, it will be my first ever finished book. I'm editing it slightly, I wasn't quick enough to finish writing this for the Watties but to be honest I wasn't being too serious with it. I am still planning on finishing this and I'm working on a description to put here. Please vote/comment whatever and let me know what you think OK :)

12 Steps to Not Fall in Love on Wattpad by iFantasy

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100 Things You Should Know About Writing (Part 2) by MishaGerrick

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If You Love Me by slybatspidow

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FINDING HOME IN YOU by deliciouspeach__

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