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This is my first poem I actually like and I would like all comments and criticism, good or bad. I would also like to know whether version one or version two is better. Please and thank you!!! Now a little about the poem. I had to write a poem for a class project and I wanted to do something that would make my class mates think about God. I also wanted them to think about how they have been living their lives.
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