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Complete, First published Nov 25, 2018
Mature
They normally dress but viewed as old fashioned 
So they swagger but again called niggas
When life gets hard they rob or confiscate
But they are told to try asking for help eradicate 

But when they kindly ask for help or beg, 
they are insulted and belittled and viewed as fake
They are told to go to Hell or work for themselves.
When they toil and accumulate wealth, Bible says 
the rich will not see the Kingdom of God.

They are uniquely created as they are but isolated 
and rejected because of their skin color differentiated
so they try to beautify themselves 
yet people still negatively disrespected 
and called bleachers that makes them depressed

They are peacemakers who don't fight 
but people called them cowards.

They have personality of calmness and silence 
but people called them "Silent Killers" 
and when they try talking a lot called dealers
 who is better between a quiet and the disturbers?

WHAT A WORLD WE ARE IN ALL!!!
May God help the hated and the rejected?
The abused and the accused
The confused and the misused
The isolated and the fascinated 

GOD ALSO RELEASE AND BLESSE
The traumatized and the marginalized
the dehumanized and the criticized ones
And every one who is challenged 
in making choice and raising a voice.

AND YOU BROTHER AND SISTER, 
DO WHAT GIVES YOU HAPPINESS AND SUCCESS. 

But "CAUTION" make sure you don't interfere 
and hurt someone. This is where we go parallel.
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