A Dragon and a Phoenix

Blurb:
Follow a path which is foreseen in the eyes of a wise tree, travel the journey through the eyes of a deer, hear the channeled chaos with the ears of an elephant and have the courage of a Phoenix.

A place tainted with scales and steel, washed away with bloody hands and distorted desires.
'What a lovely sight' says the coward. Yes, such a shame he has now become a rotten apple, a rotten thief indeed.

A new place, a lovely paradise, an oasis with pink and orange with red ... then black. "A spreaded disease? But how so quickly, when so far," says the girl. Her friend replies, "Ah yes, but what a beautiful sight."
As the friend jumps to freedom the other follows behind.

Hello this is Pheonix here with an amazing story that I am really excited to publish, I didn't have the time to create good books, especially with school. So I really hope you enjoy something i've created as much as me, please give me harsh constructive criticism, so I can improve my writing. I've written everything I need to know on dot points from start to finish, so I know when it ends. That means I can just adjust my story as I go.

This is something that defines my persona, so if I am to get positive reviews I will be so happy. ^-^

Thanks!~