Rachelle's Guardian

Rachelle's Guardian

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NOTE: This is actually part of a FINISHED book, that has been through the first edit already, and is currently going through the second edit. It will be published most likely in the next few months. I'll notify my readers here when it is, so they can purchase it if they wish to continue reading. I'm ONLY posting the first five chapters. That's it. So, if you have something to suggest before it's published, this is your chance. If you want to read the rest of the book, I'll post links to where you can buy it once it's published. Please leave a comment! I don't care how long or short it is, and you don't even have to praise my book. If all you do is point out some errors, that's perfectly fine by me. I just want some feedback. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "What's happening to her?" Garett screamed. Mason shoved him back and bent over me, pressing a hand to my forehead. I moaned and my back arched. Sweat drenched every inch of my clothes. I could see them coming. My day terrors, the black shadows. Their fingers reached for my soul, trying to convince me that it was time to leave this place. It was time. I screamed. The edges of my vision were starting to darken, and the last thing I saw before my vision was gone was Garett tearing at his hair. "Jaer help her!" he shouted. Then I heard Mason's voice, soft like the caress of a mellow day's sea wind, "She's dying."
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She knew his identity. He didn't know hers. She just wanted to have him around. He didn't. She knew they could not be together. He didn't. She didn't plan for longer. But he did. What will happen when he comes to know her real identity? Will he be able to stop himself in time from falling or will she have to face his wrath for hiding the truth. __________ "Do you believe in love?" He whispered in her ears making her jump. He was close, no, too close. She could feel his breath and hear her heart beat pounding very fastly. She took a few steps back to get her personal space secured. "You scared me." "Sorry, that was unintentional and I did not know that you are that weak." He smirked at her. "I am not weak.. That..." she saw him taking a step towards her. She gulped and then continued. ".. is a..." Another step. ".. normal.." One more step closer. ".. reaction." Another step. By now, he was again within her personal space. "I think we should go and see if Natey is done with her books." She whispered and laughed nervously and turned back only to be hold and pulled back to a hard chest. He had purposely swirled her along with him, changing their position. His front was dangerously touching her back. "It's a weak who always run away showing back." He whispered in her ears, his breaths touching her neck. His hands were placed just below her breast and touching most of her abs part. ___________________________________________________________________________ This is my first attempt at writing. So please bear with me :) Suggestions, feedback, comments and votes are welcomed. :)

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