Rachelle's Guardian

NOTE: This is actually part of a FINISHED book, that has been through the first edit already, and is currently going through the second edit. It will be published most likely in the next few months. I'll notify my readers here when it is, so they can purchase it if they wish to continue reading.

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"What's happening to her?" Garett screamed.

Mason shoved him back and bent over me, pressing a hand to my forehead.

I moaned and my back arched. Sweat drenched every inch of my clothes. I could see them coming. My day terrors, the black shadows. Their fingers reached for my soul, trying to convince me that it was time to leave this place. It was time. I screamed.

The edges of my vision were starting to darken, and the last thing I saw before my vision was gone was Garett tearing at his hair. "Jaer help her!" he shouted.

Then I heard Mason's voice, soft like the caress of a mellow day's sea wind, "She's dying."