Detriment *IN EDITING*
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*CONTAINS SPOILERS* Eric's sister Rae is much like him! Well, much like him when he was actually himself. Though they BOTH have anger issues. Rae wants Amity, Eric wants Dauntless. What do they do? BTW this is my FIRST story so dont expect much!
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