I write what I can't express

The beginning, middle and end. Basic 3 main parts of a story, poem or any type of writing. We express words with our mouth and voices. What If we express in writing but with messages we didn't know we could hide and to let others figure out what's going on that makes you think of what's the meaning behind what you write? Figure out whats wrong in the poem, if you can find it first.
( Please DO NOT steal my writing. Poetry is very important in my life and I hate to see it fade away in someone else's hands.)