WITHDRAWN - When everything turns black.

WITHDRAWN - When everything turns black.

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Preview Prologue: "NO! LAURELIA NO! " That was the last thing I heard before I disappeared into a dark nothing. I saw the best moments of my entire life passing by as I fell. I knew I was going to die, but I had not imagined it this way. I thought it would be more of a blindingly bright light that captured you or a door that leads you to peace which you walk through. I had imagined everything. Just not that I would experience my life in reverse mode. From the beginning of high school to my school enrollment, the time in kindergarten and from there to my birth. I closed my eyes and let myself fall. I was ready to leave everything behind and become one with the light. My mind was empty and my heart had stopped beating. • PAUSED •
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"What the hell?" I took a step closer to the mirror, staring at my reflection in disbelief. The person looking back was still me, but at the same time it wasn't. I had the same thick, dark, curly hair. The same hazel eyes. The same olive skin with a light dusting of freckles (ugh) scattered across the bridge of my nose. But my curls were now streaked with highlights. And not the subtle, golden-brown ones that sometimes appeared during the summer. No, these were an aggressive, dazzling blond that went from the roots of my hair all the way to the tips. It looked like I had spent a full day getting my hair done in some upscale salon. Never mind that I had never set foot in such a place since the day I was born. My eyes appeared somehow wider and more luminous. The colour brighter, my eyelashes darker up against them. And, when I looked closely, my pupils seemed to be slitted almost like a cat. I looked down at my body. My skinny arms-which had always refused to gain any definition no matter how hard I exercised-were lined with flat, wiry muscles. My bony shoulders were now curved and smooth. My scrawny legs were toned like a dancer. I reached down and lifted my shirt, revealing two subtle lines running vertically down my perfectly flat stomach, hinting at the rock-hard abs underneath. My whole body was rippling with strength. Like liquid steel.

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