Warriors fanfiction: snow

Warriors fanfiction: snow

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This is a fanfiction from the second series of "warrior cats" by Erin Hunter that i'm working on. I have read up to "warriors: dawn" and my story is actually based off of the tribe cats, where they are forced from their home by an avalanche. Cover photo is my oc by Alice Smith (Facebook). This may come as a surprise on this site but I am accepting criticism, spelling errors, grammar errors, inconsistencies, all that crap just tell me about it, also try and tell me how I could improve the pacing (I'm struggling on that part), tell me anything wrong with it that isn't "this is stupid, you're stupid, stop being a writer, f**k you, kys." I am looking to improve and hating on me without telling me what's wrong doesn't help a damn bit. Obviously the setting and tribes belong to Erin Hunter, but all of the characters are created by me. (What do I set my copyright setting to for this?)
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"There will be one cat that will spark the Clans into madness, but only the frost will realize the trouble that the Clans will face and defeat it." Frostkit, a kit of ThunderClan, is very Independent and doesn't understand why most things were fun. She also has a quick-temper and was most of the time polite though fierce. Her mother died when she was born and Frostkit always thought it was Mistleaf's fault, though her father said she wasn't the reason. Frostpaw becomes more independent then ever as cats from outside the Clan roams inside the Clans. The senior warriors of ThunderClan have met them before and eagerly accepts them into the Clan. Frostpaw feels that they are weird and tries to stay away from them any way that she can, but what happens when something horrible happens? She'll have to be figure it out before terrible things will happen to her beloved Clan... (I only own the plot and oc's. The idea WARRIORS goes to Erin Hunter. Go read their books if you haven't already.)

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