The Dark Hall That Never Ends
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Ongoing8m
Last published Tue, Apr 30, 2019
For my first story thought i might make it interesting
The story takes place in a haunted hotel that 17 year old Kyle and his three friends John, Mark, and Zack decide to explore after school.They end up in situation they can never get out of, a dark hallway that never ends
Im not going to spoil to much but I hope you enjoy my first story. Also thank Azy_Storm45 for helping me wrote this story
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