Better
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Ongoing, First published Jul 19, 2012
Rachel Hilman has always believed there is more to the world than Friday Night football games and the Derto's Frozen Lemonade cart in the square. Small-town life just isn't right for her, and she knows it. She can't wait to get out, but at 15, that's easier said then done.

Until she meets Aribelle at the 24/7 mart on the outskirts of town. With no parents, family or serious living quarters, Aribelle has the life that Rachel's always wanted- the free life.  Likewise, Rachel has the life Aribelle has always envied- the life of sureness, the life of security.

And what's better, the girls look uncannily alike, almost identical.

It's not long before Rachel proposes a switch- Rachel will step into Ari's shoes, and have the freedom she craves, and Aribelle will move into Rachel's place, for the life she so despreatley wants.

But it isn't long before Rachel discovers freedom isn't all it's cracked up to be. She wants her life back- her old one.

But Aribelle likes her new life. It's a life she's not willing to give up. Rachel's life is hers now, and she's not leaving. All of Rachel's old friends and family prefer the new Rachel over the old version.

Because Aribelle is just like Rachel.

Only better.
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