Sample

I haven't written a story in forever but recently I've gotten more focused and begun to write again. I've got this idea in my head and I've begun planning out a new story and I've decided to post a little sample of the story. Feedback and comments will be appriceaeted.

*****There will be blank spots indicating where a name is supposed to go. I've only gotten a few name ideas and therefore some of the characters have no names. Not even the main character has her name yet lol********