The Life Of Pirates

It was jasmines first day at sea, having waited her entire life to finally get to travel and explore. But then her life dreams were destroyed by cruel pirates who threw her dad overboard leaving him to die, she however was spared. She didn't want to be anywhere near them, until she notices that the captain isn't quite as horrifying as he seems...
Please tell me what you think! This is a work in progress so if you notice any errors please point them out! I'm also hoping to put some art of the characters at the start of each chapter!