Just Close Your Eyes
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Bay gets completely and totally lost. She falls for the wrong guy constantly and feels like she can't rely on anyone. Derek adds more chaos and disfunction to her life, which she secretly loves. She doesn't know how to trust him, and he gives her plenty of reasons not to. But eventually she learns to just close her eyes, and let herself fall.
This is my first book ever. I started it when I was fifteen two years ago. It's been edited and changed a million times, I hope you like this version. The original will stay with only me. Please respect it, I know I'm not a grammar or speller queen but everything has its imperfections. Enjoy this book! I hope anyone can relate to this story because it's partially my own.
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