PJ's daycare (rewritten)

This book is a rewrite of my previous book on here "pj's daycare" I wanna rewrite it to see how much I've improved on my story writing, and story line development! It's been a while so I might be a little rusty! The story will change a LOT! Compared to the old story. Well I guess that's kinda why they call it a REwrite, I hope you enjoy! My dips and chips! My potatoes and fries! My guys, girls, and nonbinary friends! Stay determined!

Pre story (3rd person pov): It was a stormy day most of of the kids hated this weather and were panicking, Fresh being his normal little self wanted to go out. He ran to the door and Pj caught a glimpse of a rather large blanket. He grabbed it and brought it inside, Strange how there was a blanket outside, Pj set the blanket down wasn't made up properly so Pj got a little suspicious he opened it and suprises rushed over him.

Read the story to find out what happens next!!! UwU

I hope this one gets as many views as the other story!